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Text Box: The Escape
By Alexis H.

Text Box: “Hey Chris,” Cameron said, “want to go to the movies?  You too Jill.”
“Sure,” said Jill.
“Sure,” said Chris. At 3:00, the three friends rushed out of school. When they finally got to the movies they got popcorn and drinks. Then they saw Scary Movie 1. When the movie was over and the three friends were walking out the door, Chris said, “Hey guys I’m thinking about quitting the gang.” “NO you can’t,” said Jill.
“You’ll die,” said Cameron.
“I can’t talk about it right now.  Sorry I have to go.”
“See you tomorrow,” said Jill and Cameron together.  
When Jill got home she called og57, her ex boyfriend and the gang leader.  
“Hello,” said Jill.  
“What?” said og57.  
”Well I want to let you know that Chris is thinking about quitting the gang," said Jill. 
“Thanks,” said og57.  
“Bye,” said Jill and hung up the phone.

Text Box: A couple of weeks go by and one day Chris called Cameron.  
“Hey,” said Chris talking to Cameron on the phone, “someone told og57 that I was going to quit.”
“Oh, who do you think it is?” asked Cameron.
“I don’t know but Jill hasn’t hung out with us in at least a week.”
“We went skating and she said she did not want to go.  How strange, skating is her favorite thing to do” said Cameron. The two friends talked a little longer, then hung up.
 
Jill felt guilty about what she done so she called Chris. 
“Hello” said Chris.  
“Hey,” said Jill. 
“JILL,” said Chris “we missed you.  Are you alright?” 
“Well I wanted to tell you that I told og57 that you was going to quit the gang.”  “What!” said Chris “you betrayed me.” 
“I didn’t want you to be killed.” Chris hung up with out speaking.  
“Hey wait up” said Jill. Chris did not say anything. 
 
The next day Chris was walking down the street.  The car rolled up behind him and Og57 shot Chris in the back. Og57 look at the other gang members and said, “Jill betrayed us, so now we get Jill.”
 
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